Here is your revised ###CHAPTER dialogue with the requested fixes: new paragraph lines for each new speaker and capitalization of character names and "I" where applicable. No words have been removed or added.

We’ve barely returned to our worktable when a man appears in the doorway. It’s another of Nolan’s enforcers, Neal, I think is his name. He was enforcer number three to drag me back after I ran. “Put everything down. Nolan wants everyone.”

“But we need to get the bread in the ...